Slow Commotion For A Dance

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You didn’t fall in my sun-dance

But I did in your glance

Stepping in the cliff

Hanging in the wall

Turning around

Looking for a dance

That could split between

Slow commotion


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  1. DisabledCyclist Avatar

    Nice one 🙂

    The DC

    1. nenskei Avatar

      Thank you Steve! 😉

  2. The Blackheart Poetess Avatar

    Love it, itty bitty poet! 🙂 <3 xoxoxo

    1. nenskei Avatar

      Glad you loved it love 😉

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